Cheaters Club Book 1 Compelet Surayyahms

 Cheaters Club Book 1 Compelet Surayyahms

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  • Witching Hour / Chapter 1 & Chapter 2 Excerpt

    On a Saturday afternoon, the heart of Kano city woke up to thick cold and morning mist (muku-mukun sanyi da hazo). Ever since God's sun rose, not a single ray of sunlight had broken through; the entire town remained shrouded in a delightful chill, especially for the residents of the estate.
    She stepped outside, pushing open their gate into the estate, only to find the area completely deserted—not a single soul was outside. She closed her eyes tightly and exhaled a breath that instantly turned into smoke. Worry visited her beautiful face, and she began to pray quietly in her heart, asking God to bring the day when her dream and vision would become reality—the day she would wake up and see their estate alive just like it used to be, back when their entire extended family (Zuri'a) lived together in one place.
    She walked along, passing the rows of houses she had known since childhood, wondering why they had been left this way. She could vividly remember something in her memory from the past; she knew every house used to be packed with people, but she had lost track of why it suddenly became like this. At first, she used to ask questions repeatedly until she grew tired and stopped, because no one ever gave her an explanation that made her understand anything. Eventually, she gave up trying to figure out everything about the houses.
    Only one thing bothered her deeply: since they grew up, they were the only ones living in the estate—just two houses occupying the space, sharing family bonds as if they had no other relatives left in the world.
    Though she couldn't call herself unhappy, since she lacked nothing in life and they were always happy in their home, her main source of anxiety was her friends constantly asking her about those empty houses and what their relationship to them was.
    She once blurted out to them that the houses belonged to family members who had relocated abroad permanently. That lie weighed heavily on her conscience, and because of her deep love for her extended family (Zuri'a), she found herself missing them deeply—even though she wasn't entirely sure if things had actually been that way or not. In her heart, she felt as though she had lost a community of people she used to live with in the past, but since no one ever confirmed it to her, she figured it might just be her imagination and daydreams.
    The warmth and joyful lifestyle they shared within their two houses usually helped her forget these thoughts whenever they crossed her mind. Whenever she tried to bring up her suspicions to her parents, they would brush it aside and treat it like childish nonsense, which eventually forced her to keep it to herself and push it out of her mind. Since no one in her entire family ever sat down to explore her thoughts, her intuition told her that they were deliberately hiding the history of the past, refusing to talk about her childhood memories.
    She wandered around outside for a long time until an idea struck her. She turned around and headed straight back into their grand mansion, walking directly to her grandmother's (Granny) room.
    She found Granny lying down, wrapped in a soft blanket, watching the satellite channel Sunnah TV.
    Quickly, she rushed over, pulled off the blanket while laughing, and said, "Granny, is it really that cold outside that you have to hide inside your room? Come outside so we can catch some fresh air; maybe your bones will strengthen! If you just sit in here all day, of course you'll feel cold!"
    "Oh, you seeker of trouble," Granny smiled, "do you want the cold to finish me off? Get up and let's go, since you're here you can stay and nurse me."
    She laughed and said, "Oh my Granny, I would never want to see you in distress, because it stresses me out. I always want to see you in good health and high spirits, teasing you—that makes me happier than seeing you struggle."
    Granny smiled and said, "You rascal! Tuck my blanket back over me so I can feel warm, because I'm starting to feel the chill."
    "Haha! Granny, if you don't come out and fight this cold, it's going to knock you down. You better come outside with me. You're feeling cold just because you're cooped up inside, but when I went out, I didn't feel any cold at all. Come on, move your body a little so you can feel better!"
    Granny smiled again and said, "You actually make a fair point. Alright, hand me my hijab and let me put it on. Let's go—even if it's just to the front gate and back."
    Excitement overtook her, because this was her chance to set a trap and see if her intuition would finally pay off. She knew there was no one else she could turn to who would tell her what she longed to hear more than her grandmother.
    When they stepped outside, they didn't encounter anyone on their way to the gate. Once there, she suggested, "Granny, let's walk all the way to the end of the estate and back. That way you'll get more energy into your body."
    Granny didn't object, and they strolled along talking. While Granny's mind seemed elsewhere, the young lady spoke up: "Granny, let me ask you a question that has been bothering me for a long time."
    Granny looked up at her and said, "Raihanatu, I'm listening. What do you want to ask me?"
    "I'll tell you. I've long desired this opportunity but couldn't get it. It's not because of anything complicated, but my friends keep asking me questions about these houses, and I always end up not knowing what to say. I'm forced to lie to them, and every time I do, I feel a heavy burden in my heart."
    "Raihanatu, ask your question. As long as I have knowledge of it, I will shed light on whatever it is."
    "Granny, it's nothing other than the history of these houses. Ever since I was born, I've seen them empty, with no human soul living in them except the two houses we occupy. What is our relationship to these houses that look just like ours? Who used to live in them, or were they never inhabited since they were built? If people did live there, who were they, and where are they now?
    For a long time in my childhood imagination, I felt as though I used to live with other people, or that it happened in a dream. I've asked Abba and Ammi, but they always dismiss it as nonsense. Even Mamah and Ya Abba Junior do the same. I don't know why!"
    At that moment, warm tears rolled down her cheeks. She quickly wiped them away with her hand.
    Granny sighed and said, "Raihanatu, you are right, and I commend your intelligence and deep thinking. The truth is, all of us are aware of what you mean, and we deliberately pretend not to understand anything about it. Our reason is that we don't want past events to resurface in our lives—even though I eventually realized I was powerless and had to let it go because I had no helper. For a long time, my heart told me that you might be the one to help me, but I didn't see how that could happen."
    Raihanatu panicked upon seeing tears stream down her grandmother's face.
    "Granny, what happened? Why are you crying? Please, if my question caused your tears, forgive me. I won't ask again. Let's drop it and go back inside."
    Granny smiled, shook her head, and said, "Raihanatu, don't worry, it's nothing. Let's go wherever you want, and ask me any question you like; I will answer you. But I hope you will keep your lips sealed afterward, to prevent what happened in the past from repeating itself. I have long foreseen this—your awareness of past events might lead to the reunification of our extended family (Zuri'a), bringing us all back together as ONE FAMILY (Zuri'a Daya).
    Raihanatu, look from those houses all the way to here—they all belong to a single extended family (Zuri'a Daya). From time immemorial, they lived together in harmony. Then, in an instant, the family shattered. Out of all these numerous houses, only two families remain living here. Lack of patience, failure to understand the true meaning of kinship (zumunci), combined with greed, malice, and an inability to accept destiny (kaddara)—these are the things that actively orchestrated the destruction of a single unified family.
    A family built on mutual love and kinship (zumunci) gained fame, but suddenly it fragmented, everyone went their separate ways, and nobody knew how anyone else was doing. Furthermore, the pride of immense wealth within the family blinded them from seeing the importance of kinship. Even though there were elders, Satan and selfishness prevented them from looking past their egos, and thus the bond of kinship ordained by Allah was torn apart.
    Rehana, let's go back inside and sit down so I can untangle the entire complex web of the storm that swept through and tore us apart for nearly twenty years. Not a single one of us looked back at our sibling for the sake of Allah's kinship; Satan achieved a complete victory over his intentions. But I wish your older brother Abba was here so I could tell you this history..."
    "Granny, are you telling me that even Ya Abba doesn't know everything, when I thought he did?"
    "He can't help knowing some things since he was old enough when it happened, but I know he can recall what happened to his other relatives. Just come with me, and you will learn the true origin of your extended family. By the grace of Allah, we will find a way to restore it to what it used to be, even though it will be extremely difficult because the separation was a bitter one."
    They returned inside with heavy hearts. In the parlor, they bumped into her younger siblings watching television. Her younger sister, Zulaiha, said, "Aunty Haana, where did you go? Your phone was ringing—Zahra kept calling, and I told her you went out and left your phone in the parlor."
    "Okay, Zuly, please keep my phone for me. If anyone calls, tell them I'm not around."
    Farouk chimed in, "Aunty Haana, can I take it and play a game, please?"
    Haana was the name everyone called her because she was named after her grandmother Raihanatu, so at home and even at school, everyone called her Haana.
    "Oya, let Ya Zuly give it to you so you can play."
    He cleared his throat playfully, while she teased him that she wouldn't give it to him before finally handing it over. She then turned and followed her grandmother.
    She found Granny waiting for her, and she entered with a greeting. Granny pointed to a seat, and she sat down.
    "Raihanatu, settle down and give me your full attention. Now I am going to give you the complete history of your extended family's life and your own life as well..."
    Joy washed over her, and she said, "Yay, Granny! That's why I love you. When I finish listening, I will also tell you my dream and vision for our family (Zuri'a)."
    "Very well, may Allah fulfill our dreams and visions. Now you will hear everything so that it serves as a lesson for you and for people everywhere, because of the profound moral embedded in this story..."

    Chapter 2 Excerpt

    "The family of Alhaji Nasir Dan Fillo is a well-known and prominent lineage from their roots. They are native people of Rano Local Government Area, pure-blooded Fulani through and through, originating directly from the indigenous Fulani settlement zone of the region.
    Back when the world was peaceful, Allah blessed him with immense, abundant wealth, along with modern sophistication. Some European traders he worked with formed a deep, trustworthy bond with him through the cotton business. Recognizing his intelligence, they encouraged him to go to school so he could master his trade smoothly without relying on middlemen.
    His brilliance, diligence, and trustworthiness further elevated his standing in their eyes. Eventually, they took him with them to their country, Britain. At first, his parents strongly resisted the idea because of village gossip (surutu) that nearly derailed the plan. However, because the village head (Dagaci) intervened, his parents reluctantly yielded on the condition that if any harm befell their son, they would hold the Dagaci responsible. Alhaji Nasir agreed without hesitation.
    He spent three consecutive years without visiting home. There was no end to the uproar and insults hurled at the village head during that time. Later on, the Dagaci simply kept quiet because he knew nothing bad would happen to him—this wasn't the first time such an opportunity had arisen—so he ignored the noise.
    Then, one day, Alhaji Nasir returned home bearing such immense wealth and blessings that it shocked everyone. At first, people barely recognized him due to his refined appearance, fairness, and the polished sophistication of an educated man (dan boko). His parents were overjoyed; he looked less like a village boy and more like a European.
    Overwhelmed with joy and humility, his parents went to the Dagaci to apologize for their past hostility. The Dagaci smiled and told them not to worry, that everything was in the past.
    Once things settled down, they discussed with their son that they wanted to personally go to the Dagaci’s house to ask for his daughter’s hand in marriage on Nasir's behalf. Nasir didn't object, though he mentioned he needed to return abroad first and would marry whoever they chose for him upon his return.
    Flatly, they refused, declaring that he would not leave the country unless he was married, or else he could get married and take his wife with him. He agreed, asking only for a little time to speak with his employers.
    When they visited the Dagaci regarding the marriage proposal for his daughter, the Dagaci was overjoyed and accepted immediately, as he had several daughters.
    Being pure Fulani, they traditionally preferred marrying within their own ethnic group (Fulani), and there had long been marital alliances between their districts. When Alhaji Nasir learned which daughter had been chosen for him, he smiled deeply; ever since marriage to the Dagaci's daughters was first mentioned, she was the exact one he had secretly wanted in his heart. He had admired her for a long time, though societal norms back then dictated that one's first marriage was entirely up parental choice, forcing him to keep those feelings hidden.
    Just as he was preparing to return to Britain, his employers arrived in Rano and announced they fully supported him marrying and taking his wife with him. Immense joy filled his heart, and within a short time, the marriage between Alhaji Nasir and Hajia Kubra was solemnized. Following traditional Fulani wedding rites that deeply impressed his European employers—who had a deep appreciation for cultural heritage—they departed for Britain a week after the wedding.
    They spent roughly five years there, visiting home three times during that period. By the time they returned permanently to Nigeria, they had been blessed with two children, Bara'atu and Ja'afar, and they settled back in Rano.
    That was when prosperity truly exploded. They opened a massive cotton company right in the heart of Kano city (Kwaryar Kano), which he personally managed. They stopped shipping things from abroad as he took full charge of everything locally.
    Later on, within his father's extended family, another wife named Safiyya was married to him. She and Hajia Kubra lived peacefully together, sharing a harmonious home without any rivalry. After four years, both women began giving birth, and he began building a large extended family (Zuri'a).
    It was during this period that his mother expressed her desire for him to marry the daughter of her full sister. Hajia Kubra and Safiyya vehemently opposed this, creating a massive uproar and protesting fiercely. Alhaji Nasir, however, stood his ground, insisting that no one could prevent him from obeying his mother's command.
    When his stance did not break their resistance, and seeing that their protests only escalated, he laid down the law: whichever of them was willing to live with him under those terms should prepare herself, because whatever happened was up to him. United in defiance, they banded together and told him he wasn't man enough to pull it off.

    Summary

    This excerpt from Kishiyar Ƙabila introduces readers to Raihanatu (fondly called Haana), a young woman living in a seemingly deserted, sprawling estate in Kano alongside only her grandmother and immediate family. Tormented by questions about why all the surrounding houses in their estate are empty and abandoned, Haana finally gathers the courage to question her grandmother (Granny).
    Moved by Haana's persistence and sorrow, Granny breaks decades of enforced silence. She reveals a tragic family history: how the once-prosperous, unified extended family (Zuri'a) of Alhaji Nasir Dan Fillo—a wealthy pioneer cotton magnate from Rano with roots in international trade—was completely torn apart. The fragmentation was driven by human greed, lack of patience, bad character, and a refusal to respect kinship (zumunci). Granny hopes that unearthing this dark past will serve as a lesson and potentially spark the reunification of the scattered family.
    The narrative then transitions into the detailed historical backstory of Alhaji Nasir Dan Fillo: his rise from a local Rano background, his education and partnership with European cotton merchants in Britain, his return as a wealthy modern man, his marriage to Hajia Kubra (the Dagaci's daughter), and the subsequent domestic friction that arose when his mother later demanded he take a second wife from her own side of the family.

    Description

    • The Atmospheric Opening: The text establishes a moody, reflective tone with the description of a cold, misty Saturday morning in Kano (Kwaryar Kano), mirroring the psychological chill and isolation of the abandoned estate.
    • Generational Inquiries: Haana represents youthful curiosity pushing against generational trauma. Her innocent questions act as a narrative key, unlocking a vault of family secrets that older members (like her parents and brother) deliberately tried to bury.
    • Historical Epic Arc: The narrative shifts into a sweeping generational saga (Saga), detailing the rise of Alhaji Nasir Dan Fillo. It paints a vivid picture of pre-modern and colonial-era northern life—blending indigenous Fulani traditions, village politics (Dagaci), European commercial ties in Britain, and the complex dynamics of polygamous extended families.
    • The Anatomy of Family Rupture: Granny’s explanation moves beyond mere gossip, framing the family's collapse as a spiritual and moral failure caused by pride, wealth, and the decay of communal bonds (zumunci).

      Analytics

      Analytical DimensionDetailed Breakdown & Key Insights
      Character Profiles & DynamicsRaihanatu (Haana): Driven by intuitive curiosity and a longing for connection. She acts as the emotional bridge between the hidden past and the unresolved present.
      Granny: The keeper of ancestral memory. Burdened by past grief, she recognizes Haana as the unexpected catalyst capable of healing generational wounds. 
      Alhaji Nasir Dan Fillo: The foundational patriarch whose immense wealth, cross-cultural exposure (Britain), and patriarchal authority simultaneously built an empire and sowed the seeds of domestic friction. 
      Central ThemesGenerational Trauma & Silence: The psychological weight of adults hiding past tragedies from the younger generation under the guise of "protection" or "peace."
      The Sanctity of Kinship (Zumunci): How greed, materialism, and ego destroy family unity, turning vast estates into ghost towns. 
      Cultural Synthesis: The friction and blend between traditional Fulani-Yoruba/Northern rural life (Rano) and Western/colonial education and business. 
      Literary Techniques & StructureThe author employs a frame narrative (story-within-a-story). The contemporary framing device (Haana and Granny talking on a cold Kano morning) grounds the reader emotionally before diving deep into an epic, historical flashback detailing the rise and fall of the Dan Fillo lineage.