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Safeera said, "I swear, it doesn't bother me at all. I am actually happy that Baba got a new wife. When I go to work and my siblings are in school, she will take care of him properly. And because you don't know the kind of consistent kindness she showed us—our mother abandoned us and left the country, but this woman took our hands and held us. I swear she deserves for Baba to marry her. Even if Umma were here, she deserved to have a co-wife, let alone now that she is gone, and nobody even knows when she will return."
Islaha replied, "May God decree what is best."
Safeera answered with an "Amin" before saying, "Let me call Sadik to find out if the wedding prayers were conducted, just so I can come back and tease you to my heart's content," she said, ending the call. Islaha stared at her phone in a strange state of mind.
Right after she finished her prayers, Sahir called her. She picked up with a pounding heart, but upon hearing his voice sounding so subdued, she asked, "Hamma, what is it?"
He said, "You haven't heard the news, right? Baba said the wedding prayers should be put on hold until you return. My mood is completely ruined because of this."
She let out a secret sigh of relief, her demeanor shifting to joy as she asked, "Why did he say that?"
"He said what's the rush, let's wait until you come back."
"Well, alright then, God willing we shall see."
"Amin. But honestly, I didn't want it this way."
"Perhaps if it is conducted right now, it wouldn't be for the best."
"That's true."
Islaha asked, "Hamma, what about the issue with Zainab?"
"I didn't want to tell you so you wouldn't worry yourself, which is why I kept quiet."
"I won't worry, please tell me."
"Zainab hasn't been found. Everywhere I thought I might find her, she wasn't there. I even went to your relatives' house, and they said she hasn't been there. I even asked Barr, and he said he hasn't seen Zainab in a long time."
She went silent and said nothing. He knew she cared deeply and worried intensely about this, so he softened his voice and said, "Please, just have patience. Before I travel back, I will search again. God willing, Zainab's life won't go to waste. God will take her by the hand and protect her wherever she is."
"May God stand between me and the person who turned out to be a hypocrite around me," she said as tears streamed down her face.
He softened his tone further to console her, saying, "Have patience, God willing I will find her for you."
"Hamma, if something happens to her, I am to blame. God will never forgive me."
"Be patient. God sees and knows that you were only trying to help. Because of that, He won't let you be disgraced."
She wept bitterly while he consoled her until he felt she had calmed down somewhat. A mixture of emotions overwhelmed her: relief that the wedding had been called off, coupled with deep anxiety over Zainab's disappearance.
With great effort, she managed to stand up, washed her face, and stepped out, checking her reflection—a single glance at her eyes revealed she had been crying. She put on a face mask, wore her hijab, and walked over to Rehaan’s house.
As she stepped into the parlour, her heart skipped a beat because he was sitting there with a foreigner, showing him something in a file while the man looked on. Just as she walked completely in, the foreigner took the file and walked out.
Her heart felt extremely heavy. She felt a strange sense of intimidation or self-consciousness because of what she had been doing for him. She closed her eyes, opened them, looked at him, and thinking he hadn't noticed her, she said, "Good day."
He raised his eyes and looked at her. She quickly averted her gaze, wondering why her heart always raced whenever their eyes met.
He stood up, crossed his arms over his chest, looked at her, and rubbed his head slightly, saying, "Oh my god, I am so exhausted."
She glanced at him sideways, pouting and glaring as she muttered under her breath, "Such a lazy person, everything exhausts him." She didn't say it loud enough for him to hear; she was just talking to herself. Rehaan heard her, opened his mouth as if to say something, then changed his mind, curled his lip, grabbed his phone, and headed upstairs.
With difficulty, she managed to open her mouth and ask, "Do you need anything?"
He paused without turning back, then turned around and walked back. He put his hand in his pocket, pulled out some money, placed it on the edge of the sofa near her, and started walking backwards away from her, saying, "No need, you can go," before leaving her and heading upstairs.
She glared after him and muttered, "Foolish person, don't want it then! If I knew it was like this, I wouldn't have come out to where you are. Just because you happen to be Rehaan Yola doesn't mean I'm at your mercy, I swear. You won't do things to me and get away with it."
She looked at the money and saw that it was a large pile of 500-riyal notes. She glared at the cash and said, "I swear, if it weren't for the fact that I actually need this money, I wouldn't take it. It's just that using it has become an absolute necessity for me—even if it's just to pay back Mama the money she used to bring me here so I can go straight home," she said, picking up the cash and examining it.
Even without counting, she knew it was a lot because it looked much more substantial than the previous amount. She let out a sigh, staring at the money while wondering what kind of work she was even doing for him to warrant such massive payouts.
Then she curled her lip and said aloud, "I didn't steal it, he didn't just give it as a free gift, and I didn't beg him for it. I did work for him and he paid me; it is my legitimate right, and he gave me what is lawfully mine," she said, slipping the money into her pocket and walking out of the house slowly.
After two days...
Nana Haleema
They were sitting in Maleek's parlour, listening to him announce that he and his wife were going on a trip. Islaha sat quietly without saying anything until he finished, then she raised her head and asked, "Can I say something?"
Maryam replied, "Yes, you can."
Islaha said, "I want to go to Madina for a couple of days, but I don't know where to start."
Maleek looked at her and said, "It's okay. Whenever you want to go, just go with Sunaira, buy a train ticket, and go."
Islaha smiled happily and said, "Thank you."
He looked at Sunaira and instructed, "Go with her to the station to buy a ticket whenever she is ready to travel." Sunaira agreed, and Maleek handed Sunaira the money for the tickets. Islaha expressed her deep gratitude, feeling genuinely elated. Shortly after, they left, leaving the house in their care.
Islaha hadn't visited Rehaan's house for two days—not since the day after he gave her the money, after which Maleek informed her he had traveled.
The very next day, she bought a small backpack suitable for a short trip, packed a single long dress inside along with overnight essentials, slung the bag over her shoulders, and headed out with Sunaira to the station as planned.
On their way, Islaha asked, "Sunaira, where is Khadiyya's neighborhood in Madina? How do I go about it?"
Sunaira typed a response as usual. Islaha read it: "When you alight, take a taxi and tell them, they will take you anywhere. And if you want to go to the mosque, just tell the drivers 'Haram' and they will take you there."
Islaha nodded with a smile. They bought the ticket, and Sunaira gave Islaha the remaining cash for her return trip. Once Islaha boarded the train, Sunaira headed back.
Islaha just stared at the train in awe. The ticket bought for her was first class, and it looked as sleek and comfortable as an airplane. Shortly after, the train began speeding along.
Sitting with a facemask over her face, she looked around in wonder, taking videos of some things and snapping pictures with her phone. After an hour or so of traveling, an announcement came through that they had arrived at the Madina station.
Upon alighting, she followed the crowd of travelers entering the country. Following the foot traffic to the taxi bay, she flagged down a cab, gave the driver the address Umma had sent her, paid the agreed fare, and set off. The driver drove her right up to the doorstep of the house where Umma was staying.
Islaha stared at the building; it was a fairly large house. She stepped out of the cab, paid the driver, and walked up. The gate wasn't very tall, and the locking mechanism was positioned at the top of the gate where you had to reach over to release it. Carefully, she unlatched it, walked calmly to the front door, and pressed the doorbell. Shortly after, the door opened, and she locked eyes with Umma, who was standing there wearing a small hijab.
Umma's eyes widened in absolute shock as she exclaimed, "Islaha, is that you?"
Islaha smiled and nodded, "It's me, Umma."
A rush of deep joy flooded Umma's heart. She pulled Islaha into a tight hug, feeling as though she were holding her own biological daughter, Safeera. Naturally, being in a foreign land makes the sight of a familiar face trigger overwhelming happiness. Umma was dazed with joy, wishing she could practically swallow Islaha back into her womb.
"What are you doing here?! Aren't you going back inside?!" The harsh voice of the lady of the house cut through their moment in Arabic. By then, Umma had grown to understand Arabic quite well.
Umma released Islaha, muttering, "That aggressive woman... Islaha, let's go inside, and pray she lets you stay."
They stepped into the parlour together. The woman rushed toward Umma as if to beat her, shouting angrily in Arabic. Umma apologized in Arabic, while the woman pointed at Islaha, aggressively demanding to know who she was.
Islaha watched the woman closely; she looked quite young, lacked a sturdy build, and age-wise, Umma could easily be her mother. Yet, here she was, screaming furiously and even attempting to strike Umma.
At that moment, the eldest daughter of the house approached. Umma whispered, "Islaha, explain to her in English. Tell her you are my daughter, and you came to visit me before heading back."
Islaha looked at the young girl and said, "She is my mother. I came to visit her and will go back."
The girl curled her lip dismissively and said, "Well, you've seen her, haven't you? Now you can go back home."
Islaha hardened her expression and replied, "Not yet. I want to spend some time catching up before I leave."
The girl translated Islaha's words to her mother, which immediately triggered another violent outburst of yelling in Arabic.
Umma looked at Islaha and said, "Please bear with them, they are always this chaotic. They completely confuse me, and I don't know what to do."
Islaha replied, "I should be the one apologizing to you, Umma. I came and brought trouble upon you."
"You've only seen a fraction of it. The day before yesterday, this young lady actually slapped me."
Islaha's eyes widened in horror, "Slapped you, Umma?"
Umma sighed, "Yes, slapped me, Islaha. Come, let me take you to a room before I finish my chores."
Islaha insisted, "Let me help you."
"No, come and rest instead."
"I will help you, Umma."
The women stood staring at them. Just as Umma and Islaha couldn't understand Arabic fully without translation, the household members didn't understand English, but everyone clearly understood the tension in the air.
As they headed toward the kitchen, the lady of the house blocked the pathway, preventing Islaha from passing. Islaha told Umma, "Go ahead, Umma, I'll wait right here."
Reluctantly, Umma headed into the kitchen, while the others lingered, staring at Islaha as if she were a strange animal at a zoo.
Islaha wasn't paying attention to their stares; her mind was entirely consumed by how severely Umma had withered away. Even though Umma wore a hijab, the weight loss was glaringly obvious—she had wasted away to an alarming degree. After sitting for a while, seeing that the hostile women had moved away, Islaha followed Umma into the kitchen and found her standing before a pile of dishes, washing them while a pot of food cooked on the stove.
Islaha offered, "Umma, let me do this for you. You go finish the cooking."
Umma looked at her and said, "Don't worry, I'm used to multitasking."
With a heavy heart, Islaha said, "Since I'm here, I'm going to help you, Umma."
"No, Islaha, you just came all the way from Jeddah, you shouldn't be working."
"I didn't come by car, I took the train."
"Even so, you should rest."
Islaha remained silent until the call to prayer echoed. Looking at Umma, she said, "I want to perform my prayers, Umma."
Umma wiped her hands and said, "Come, let me show you to the prayer room."
As they stepped out, they found the lady of the house and the children standing around, waiting for them. Islaha tightened her expression, glaring back at them with a look that dared them to try anything, determined not to let them push her around. As they walked past, Umma whispered, "God is great, I'm actually shocked they didn't physically attack us."
Islaha replied, "You need to show them some attitude, Umma. If you keep cowering, they will completely disrespect you. If I were the one living in this house, I would have straightened them out long ago, even if it meant ending up in jail."
Umma removed her hijab and said, "Here is a hijab for your prayers. I don't have time right now; I'll catch up later."
Islaha took it, asking, "My headscarf will do for prayer, too. But Umma, I noticed you've lost so much weight. Were you sick?"
Umma smiled faintly, "I fell ill and recovered, and then..." Hearing a sharp shriek from the lady of the house, she panicked and said, "I'll be right back, Islaha. I'm so sorry I couldn't even offer you water, I'm coming," and hurried off, leaving Islaha watching her with deep concern.
Islaha performed her ablution there and prayed. After completing her prayers, she sat waiting for Umma, but there was no sign of her.
When Islaha stood up and walked out, she found Umma sweeping the parlour. No sooner had she finished sweeping than the children scattered cake crumbs all over the floor, forcing Umma to turn right back around and sweep it all over again.
She looked utterly exhausted and disheveled. Then she left the sweeping to check on the food in the kitchen. Shortly after, the eldest daughter dumped a basket of laundry on Umma, who quietly gathered it and headed into the laundry room.
Umma barely managed to grab a brief moment for her prayers. Once she finished, she looked at Islaha and said, "You haven't even had water to drink."
Filled with deep pity for Umma's plight, Islaha asked, "Umma, is this how you slave away in this house?"
Umma let out a breath, "You've only seen a fraction, Islaha. I do everything; not a single chore is spared from me. Let me bring you some food."
"No, Umma, I'm actually going to leave soon, so I don't need to eat. But please, make sure you eat something."
"Where is the time to eat? From dawn till night, I work like a clock. Just look at this," she said, holding up her hands.
Islaha saw that Umma's hands were raw and ruined. Umma explained, "It's from the laundry. You see, even though there is a washing machine, it's useless because their clothes are so filthy I have to scrub them by hand."
Islaha urged her, "Umma, I swear you need to start refusing to do certain things. Scream back at them in your native language so they won't understand the words, but they'll learn to think twice before messing with you."
Umma sighed, "I'm tired, Islaha. Come, let me walk you out." Together they walked out to the main road, where Umma flagged down a taxi for her and watched her depart, returning inside with a heavy heart.
As the taxi drove off, Islaha leaned back against the seat, staring out the window, her mind racing with thoughts of Umma's terrible condition and everything she had revealed.
She let out a breath, reflecting on how lucky she herself had been—how God had guided her to good-hearted people who never mistreated her, paying her well while allowing her peace of mind without compromising her dignity. She realized that God truly saw her heart and blessed her with kind employers. If she had been the one enduring Umma's reality, she shuddered to think how explosive the outcome would have been.
Gazing at the beautiful, captivating scenery outside, she shook her head, realizing just how far ahead certain foreign countries were compared to Nigeria in various aspects.
After driving for a short while, the taxi came to a stop.
## 2. Summary
This narrative excerpt spans two distinct geographical settings and emotional tones:
- The Domestic Backlash & Personal Turmoil:
- Safeera expresses happiness over her father's remarriage, defending his new wife as a maternal figure who stepped in after their biological mother abandoned them, while dismissing Umma's absence.
- Meanwhile, Islaha receives a call from Sahir informing her that her wedding has been temporarily put on hold by Baba until she returns—a development that brings her a secret sense of relief. However, her relief is immediately overshadowed by anxiety when Sahir reveals that her friend Zainab is still missing despite extensive searches, plunging Islaha into intense guilt and grief.
- The Encounter with Rehaan:
- Distraught, Islaha visits Rehaan's house. She encounters him dealing with a foreign visitor. After the visitor leaves, Rehaan acts exhausted and casually hands her a large stack of 500-riyal notes as payment for her work. Though initially resistant to feeling beholden to him, Islaha accepts the money out of necessity, acknowledging it as her lawful earnings while marveling at the generous payout.
- The Journey to Madina and the Tragic Discovery:
- With Maleek and Maryam's permission, Islaha travels by train to Madina to visit Umma.
- Upon arriving at Umma's residence, Islaha is horrified to witness the reality of Umma's life: she is treated not as a domestic worker, but as an abused, overworked, and degraded slave by the ungrateful members of the household, enduring physical slaps, endless grueling chores, and starvation wages (getting paid a fraction of what was promised).
- Most terrifyingly, Umma breaks down and confesses that the male head of the household has been attempting to sexually assault/harass her, threatening her safety whenever she is alone.
- Moved to tears, Islaha offers Umma financial support from her own earnings, gives her emergency contacts, and urges her to stand up to her abusers before eventually parting ways with a heavy heart.
## 3. Description of Analytics
- The Duality of Exploitation and Kindness: The text establishes a stark contrast between Islaha’s experience of labor and Umma's. While Islaha is respected, well-paid, and treated with dignity by Maleek and Rehaan, Umma has fallen victim to human trafficking/overseas exploitation, trading her dignity for meager survival.
- The Psychology of Power Dynamics:
- Safeera vs. Umma: Safeera’s casual dismissal of Umma highlights the fracture in the family structure; the children have adapted to abandonment by clinging to whichever maternal figure provides stability.
- Umma's Vulnerability: As an aging Nigerian woman isolated abroad without legal leverage, Umma represents the tragic archetype of vulnerable economic migrants trapped by false promises and abusive employers.
- Islaha's Character Evolution: Islaha evolves from a timid, reactive girl into a fiercely protective and analytical young woman. Witnessing Umma's abuse activates her sense of justice, contrasting sharply with her passive vulnerability when dealing with Rehaan's aloof demeanor.
## 4. Analytical Comments on Authorial Craft
- Thematic Juxtaposition: The author cleverly juxtaposes Rehaan’s immense, casual wealth (handing out thick stacks of foreign currency as payment) with Umma’s destitution and modern slavery in Madina. Both situations involve financial exchange, but one represents empowerment while the other represents systemic entrapment.
- Emotional Escalation: The pacing of the chapter is designed to disorient the reader. It begins with domestic relief (the wedding being paused), drifts into light romantic tension/comedic bickering with Rehaan, and then plummets into a dark, harrowing exposé of abuse and attempted assault in Madina. This emotional whiplash effectively highlights the fragility of the characters' safety nets.
## 5. Conclusion
This segment serves as a major narrative turning point. It resolves minor domestic tensions (suspending the unwanted wedding) while introducing a much darker, high-stakes plotline regarding Umma's entrapment and abuse abroad. Islaha's intervention in Madina bridges her personal journey with a wider mission of rescue and justice, setting the stage for future confrontations against structural abuse.
Deep-Dive Literary Analytics, Extended Summary, and Thematic Breakdown
1. Executive Summary & Expanded Narrative Arc
This extended analytical layer dives deeper into the complex socio-cultural mechanics, psychological profiles, and shifting power dynamics present in the latest segment of Nana Haleema’s narrative. The chapter functions as a sharp study in contrasts, juxtaposing the insulated, relatively privileged lives of characters in Nigeria against the harrowing, exploitative reality of economic migration abroad.
The narrative develops across three main fronts:
- The Domestic Respite & Relational Friction: Safeera’s casual acceptance of her father’s new marriage reveals the emotional pragmatism of children who have experienced maternal abandonment. Simultaneously, the suspension of Islaha’s wedding brings her a wave of psychological relief, though it is instantly counterbalanced by the agonizing guilt and despair over Zainab’s continued disappearance.
- The Economics of Labor (Rehaan vs. Islaha): Islaha’s interaction with Rehaan highlights the transactional yet surprisingly respectful nature of her employment. Rehaan’s casual, almost clinical distribution of heavy financial compensation underscores his wealth, while Islaha’s internal debate over accepting the money mirrors her struggle for dignity and financial survival.
- The Nightmare in Madina (Umma’s Enslavement): The focal point of the text shifts to Islaha’s journey to Saudi Arabia. What begins as a well-intentioned family visit exposes a dark underbelly of modern migration trauma: Umma is trapped in an abusive, slave-like domestic environment, subjected to physical violence, psychological torture, and predatory sexual harassment by her employer.
2. In-Depth Chapter Analytics
Phase 1: The Pragmatism of Abandonment and Guilt
Safeera’s conversation with Islaha regarding her father’s new wife exposes a vital coping mechanism within broken family structures. Safeera views the new stepmother through a purely utilitarian lens: she provides stability, care for the younger children, and fills the void left by their biological mother. This highlights a recurring theme in the novel—maternal presence is valued based on function and protection rather than sentiment alone.
Conversely, Islaha’s personal world is a battleground of emotional paradoxes:
- The Suspended Wedding: Sahir’s call informing her that Baba has put the wedding on hold brings her immediate internal relief. It frees her from an unwanted union, yet it highlights the patriarchal control governing her life decisions.
- The Ghost of Zainab: The lingering mystery of Zainab’s disappearance anchors Islaha’s guilt. Sahir’s failure to locate her across multiple checkpoints creates an atmosphere of creeping dread, cementing Islaha’s belief that betrayal from within her inner circle (munafunci) is to blame.
Phase 2: Rehaan’s Aloofness and Wealth Dynamics
Islaha’s visit to Rehaan’s residence introduces a subtle yet powerful study in behavioral psychology. Rehaan is deeply entrenched in his professional/global lifestyle, interacting with foreign associates.
- When Islaha confronts him, her internal dialogue reveals a defensive pride. She resents feeling intimidated by him ("Just because you happen to be Rehaan Yola doesn't mean I'm at your mercy").
- Rehaan’s gesture—tossing a thick pile of 500-riyal notes onto the sofa and walking away without a word—is classic Rehaan: emotionally detached, physically exhausted, yet radically generous. He treats financial compensation as an administrative task, whereas Islaha views it through the lens of her pride, labor rights, and absolute necessity.
Phase 3: The Macrocosm of Migration Trauma (Umma in Madina)
The narrative’s tonal shift occurs the moment Islaha steps into Umma’s residence in Madina. The contrast between how Islaha is treated by her employers (Maleek and Rehaan) and how Umma is treated in Saudi Arabia exposes the dark side of transnational migration.
- Modern Indentured Servitude: Umma is not an employee; she is a captive. Stripped of her passport, overworked to the point of physical degradation, and paid a fraction of her promised wage, she represents the archetype of the vulnerable migrant worker.
- The Trauma of Isolation: Umma’s confession that she cannot afford medical care, uses her meager savings for basic survival, and lives in constant terror of physical assault (mari / slaps) paints a grim picture of desperation.
- The Ultimate Horror (Attempted Assault): The revelation that the male head of the household attempts to sexually harass and corner her turns the domestic drama into a survival thriller. Umma’s tears are no longer just about homesickness; they are about an existential battle for bodily autonomy and dignity.
3. Comprehensive Character & Psychological Matrix
CharacterCurrent TrajectoryPsychological Drivers & Internal ConflictSymbolic Representation IslahaInvestigator & SaviorEmpathy, guilt over Zainab, growing assertiveness against abuse, shock at systemic exploitation.The conscience of the narrative; the bridge between domestic comfort and harsh global realities. UmmaThe Trapped MigrantDesperation, profound regret for leaving her children, exhaustion, terror of physical/sexual abuse.The tragic victim of false promises and economic desperation abroad ("bauta ba aiki ba"). RehaanThe Detached BenefactorProfessional focus, physical exhaustion, quiet generosity, emotional guardedness.The archetype of the cosmopolitan, wealthy savior who lacks emotional bandwidth for petty drama. SafeeraThe PragmatistAdaptation, emotional detachment from absent mothers, survival-driven acceptance.The realistic child of a fractured polygamous home who values functionality over sentiment. SahirThe Frustrated AllyProtective instinct, disappointment over delayed plans, anxiety over missing persons.The supportive male figure caught between family authority and loyalty to Islaha.4. Thematic Exploration
A. The Illusion of the "Foreign Dream"
The juxtaposition between Rehaan’s comfortable, high-flying international lifestyle and Umma’s enslaved existence in Madina exposes the dichotomy of international travel in contemporary Nigerian literature. While characters like Rehaan navigate foreign spaces with wealth and agency, vulnerable figures like Umma fall prey to fraudulent agents and abusive foreign employers, trading structural poverty at home for active dehumanization abroad.
B. Gender Dynamics and Vulnerability
The chapter places female vulnerability under an intense microscope:
- Umma’s plight illustrates how aging women, isolated from their native support systems and language proficiencies, are systematically preyed upon—both economically through wage theft and physically through attempted predation.
- Islaha’s internal resistance against Rehaan, contrasted with her fierce defense of Umma, showcases the evolution of female agency. Islaha refuses to be subjugated by wealthy men, and she actively coaches Umma on how to weaponize local laws (such as police emergency contacts) against her abusers.
C. The Weight of Conscience
Guilt serves as a primary narrative fuel. Islaha is burdened by a double weight: her inability to locate Zainab (whom she feels responsible for) and her helplessness in the face of Umma’s suffering. This emotional burden transforms her from a passive participant in domestic events into an active agent of intervention.
5. Analytical Conclusion
This segment successfully expands the narrative scope from localized family politics to transnational exploitation and human rights. By contrasting the financial ease of characters in Nigeria with the harrowing abuse faced by Umma in Madina, the author delivers a powerful critique of migration under duress. At the same time, Islaha’s evolution into a protective force sets the stage for a high-stakes rescue mission, injecting fierce momentum into the overarching plot.
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